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Nothing's Forever
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:54:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Serenity in a misty steam of heaven
Silence all around
Nothing heard but the softness of my breaths:
Inhale.
Exhale.
All is safe, secure.
But then the water runs cold.
I let out a yelp of alarm,
And realize nothing lasts forever.
Copyright ©
cuddlytiger17
... [
2004-10-10 22:54:59]
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Re: Nothing's Forever
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:09:35 PM AEST
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This is an awesome write. So very true that nothing last forever, sometimes it's good that it does and sometimes it isn't.
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Re: Nothing's Forever
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by shanarah on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:14:42 PM AEST
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true nothing lasts forever, just enjoy time while we have it. great write, take care,
shanarah... |
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Re: Nothing's Forever
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:27:46 PM AEST
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| hey you know what, this was really good. i liked how it read and felt. i very funny write with maybe a hint of real life truth at the end. great write, i am off to read the others. |
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Re: Nothing's Forever
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by waos on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:55:37 PM AEST
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| that's a cool way to look at forever... good stuff |
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Re: Nothing's Forever
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by pixie on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 06:48:43 AM AEST
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i believe that true love is forever, even in death it lvs on, a wonderful write, short and powerful,
pixie xx |
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