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Unstable
Contributed by
Quilted_rag_doll
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:45:36 PM in AEST
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I'm as unstable as the ice,
on a warmer winters day.
Like a child on a pogo stick,
always wanting to go out and play.
Like a clown on a unicycle,
juggling torches and knives.
A girl on a balcony,
preparing to dive.
There are times,
where instability strikes.
Piercing hard and fast,
like a thousand sharp spikes.
Its in those moments,
confusion takes control.
insecurity sow's its seeds,
instability takes its toll.
The ice breaks,
the knives fall.
The girl dives,
and ends it all...
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Quilted_rag_doll
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2004-10-10 21:45:36]
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Re: Unstable
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:49:04 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem. Things can better.. Great write though. |
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Re: Unstable
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:13:58 PM AEST
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awesome write....i loved it...great job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears
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Re: Unstable
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 04:20:05 AM AEST
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| this is (as the others have said) in a word, awesome!!! i love how you put it all togther at the end, its very kool. |
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Re: Unstable
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by pixie on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 06:50:18 AM AEST
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great flow, I think we are all unstable at times, great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Unstable
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by Hoots on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 04:52:21 PM AEST
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Great poem...keep writing.
Krystle |
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