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The Moon
Contributed by
LostDream
on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The moon will never know
how beautiful you are.
Please,save my heart,
don't let it drown...
The moon will never see
how love can be so real.
Please,save my body
from dying inside your soul...
The moon will never feel
a shiver for your looks.
Please,save my hands
that are falling into yours...
The moon will always be
the light for you and me.
Cause you are just a dream...
Please,don't be just a dream!
Copyright ©
LostDream
... [
2002-11-14 22:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 10:21:55 PM AEST (User
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Beautifully written
Thanks for sharing this
i really enjoyed reading
this one, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: The Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 10:37:49 PM AEST (User
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very clever how you made the moon "Love"
Great write! Christina |
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Re: The Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by addie on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 10:11:50 PM AEST (User
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good write that was .. could really relate to it ..
keep writing
take care
addie |
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Re: The Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by LayDownPlayDead on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 01:22:45 PM AEST (User
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This is wonderfully written. I can relate to this poem. I liked it alot. |
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Re: The Moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 08:10:25 PM AEST (User
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Beautifully written
Stacie |
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