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The Pain Of Passion
Contributed by
jada
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Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:03:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The pain of passion really hurts.
It happens to be an ancient curse.
The love it goes round and round, it the love inside of you someone finally found.
You are lovers,who care about each other,
but it begins to change all your emotions seem to be pain.
Its not over its about to start.
You saw the signs he was gonna break your heart.
Now you fein for his affection, but its the curse its the pain of passion.
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jada
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2004-10-10 15:03:04]
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Re: The Pain Of Passion
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by screwup on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:06:06 PM AEST
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short... but not sweet... good poem. I can really understand where you are coming from with your words here.
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Re: The Pain Of Passion
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:12:15 PM AEST
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great one bro...i also see where your comin from...reminds me of my life...the past with my love....
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: The Pain Of Passion
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:12:51 PM AEST
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Been there felt this very powerful emotion.
Oh how it hurts.
A wonderful poem
Take care
love sweetangelukxxxxx |
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Re: The Pain Of Passion
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:35:50 PM AEST
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Ouch!!! Boy do I relate. I'm sorry anyone ever has
to feel this. But without pain, how could you enjoy
the wonder of ecstasy?
For every yin there is a yang.
Great poem!
~Breezy |
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Re: The Pain Of Passion
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by Yousef on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:24:35 PM AEST
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Short but emotional, I liked the part that says "Its not over its about to start.
You saw the signs he was gonna break your heart", good job and keep it up. |
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