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Sorry
Contributed by
tormentedpixie
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:56:22 PM in AEST
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FamilyPoems
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Dad,
There is so much I wish to tell you,
I really am sorry that I'm not perfect,
Not the way you would like.
I wish I could tell you about all the times I sit and cry,
Wishing to change our relationship.
I wish we were closer,
Like you and my brother.
I wish I was the good little girl;
That you once loved.
But most of all,
I wish I could tell you how I feel.
How much I love you,
Even though it's hard to admit.
I've never stopped loving you,
Even through all the hard times.
I'm sorry,
That's all I can say.
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tormentedpixie
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Re: Sorry
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by pixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:02:23 PM AEST
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awwww this is so very sad,i hope that one day you and your dad will become closer,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Sorry
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:20:32 PM AEST
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bro i really understand this poem...i wish all the same things you do but instead with my mom...my dad..ha i feel as if i've tried way to hard to make us have a relationship...and its never gonna happen...great poem bro!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Sorry
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:43:31 PM AEST
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| wonderful poem. I think you shouls have your dad read this.............Mike |
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Re: Sorry
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by mylastwords on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 02:54:08 AM AEST
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i know just how you feel...keep up the beautiful writing...
luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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