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My World, My Everything
Contributed by
tormentedpixie
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Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:51:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I think I love you.
I can't love you.
I want to, but I can't.
I don't think I could survive if I was to lose you.
Can't you see?
You're my world.
My happiness.
My joy.
My smiles.
My Laughter.
Without you I return,
to the dark place I left behind.
The lies.
The deceit.
My tears.
My fears.
I can't go back.
Now do you see?
How much you mean to me?
You are my everything.
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tormentedpixie
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2004-10-10 13:51:53]
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Re: My World, My Everything
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by pixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:01:11 PM AEST
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awwww this is so very bittersweet, written well
pixie xx |
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Re: My World, My Everything
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by Yousef on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:42:38 PM AEST
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| Very very simple poem, but being simple is itself a beauty, the few words written are emotional, good job but try to write something longer or should I say less simple so that anyone can really judge. |
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