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Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies.
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:37:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Bitter tongues twisted in the type and font.
Spilling blood with the loosened arrow of words.
Creatures blasting an unwelcome and unflattering message of hope.
Hope resting on our lips,
Like a bullet rests before the hammer.
Waiting to shatter the heirarchy with honesty.
Hauntingly we show up,
A phantom of the Forum,
Disillusioned to the drunken stupidty of rhyme,
No one inflicts us with impunity.
Give us your sickness and infirmaries.
Make us ill, make us suffer, make us hate.
Writing with this disease we will still carry on.
Some of you died without it,
Be we continue with it.
A child of passion and retribution.
You vomited at what we did,
And what we said.
A scroll of honey,
Turned sour on the bowels.
Remember this when you too have died,
And your muse has left.
Cutting her wrists at how pathetic the pain really is,
Sobbing in her room while she burns herself.
Self-inflicted punishment,
For the things she wants to be.
Let the muse die.
Hopeless hearts yearning to bleed for it.
Just let it die.
Finding yourself a grave countenance is all that's left.
Copyright ©
deadreckoning1983
... [
2004-10-10 13:37:54]
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Re: Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:15:24 PM AEST
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Dane,
Excellent write. Brave words.Truthful. Unabashed and unreserved.
Bravo!
My hat is off to you this day, with my
heartfelt admiration.
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Re: Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies.
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by theMoth on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:18:04 PM AEST
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Too freakin Cool!
Can't believe it!
Your gift can be so cruel.
This is a spirited attack
spoken as only you could
speak it. I will be reading
this one a million times over.
--Mothy
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Re: Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies.
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 07:48:51 PM AEST
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I'm quoting theMoth here, as it was "TOO freakin' cool"
You are such an awesome writer Dane, words flowing like blood through veins...Awesome name too
Mason |
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Re: Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies.
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:40:54 AM AEST
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Very strong write!
A bit sad but very wel l said.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies.
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 02:22:13 PM AEST
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Yeah Buddy, Git 'er done !!!!
Holy slit shippers, Batman !!!
Dane ~ this is incredible. Wow !!!
Naz ~ |
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Re: Censor This, You Jackrollin' Dandies.
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:13:01 PM AEST
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| ohh..wow i really enjoyed this. Very good write..you really have talent.. =] |
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