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The End
Contributed by
Apardame
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Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:08:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Though I had many chances of leaving you, instead I stood by your side and respected your word.
Everyone agreed I didn't deserve the tears you were giving me.
Our feelings mixed and turned blue.
Problems from us was all everyone heard.
The day has come for me to open my eyes and move on.
Walk on my feet, not stumble, nor fall.
I'm going to clear everything out and you stuff will be gone.
Wipe the tears off my face and no longer stare at the white wall.
I have to realize I can't always have what I desire.
You made me laugh and made me smile.
And I have to admit, you made me believe in what I inspire.
What I felt for you was worth-while.
I'm going to forget about the worse things that happened.
Say goodbye and drop the last tear cause I have to accept that its the end.
Copyright ©
Apardame
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2004-10-10 13:08:22]
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Re: The End
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:15:10 PM AEST
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Giving up is always hard to do... good positive write....
Jenni |
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Re: The End
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by Cutieindahurley on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:21:52 PM AEST
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| You expressed your self very well. Walking away from a relationship is never easy but sometimes it's the right thing to do for both concerned. I think you made a wise decision. The poem is awesome, beautifully written. |
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Re: The End
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:24:23 PM AEST
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This was great. Like Jenni said, very positive.
I know it's a hard thing to be doing though.
Good luck!!!
~Breezy |
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Re: The End
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by Tanmaya on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 04:41:05 AM AEST
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I liked the way you've exprssed yourself in this poem.
There's sadness...but also strength and forgiveness, instead of anger and bitterness. |
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