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I Just Died
Contributed by
pixie
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:32:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A moment ago I just died,
Now I am the grim reapers bride,
When I was alive no-one knew,
So my suicide helped me through.
The door of eternal death,
Long gone is my last breath,
My body has been crushed,
Down the drain my worthless life flushed.
Never again will you hear my voice,
I’m sorry but you don’t have a choice,
I am dead, never again to return,
Down in hell is where I’m set to burn.
You hated me when I was there,
Never showed me you cared,
So I made you happy at long last,
Now my existence is a thing of the past.
Don’t you dare cry for me,
When I was alive you failed to see,
That I lived & breathed,
I am so glad that I took early leave.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-10-10 12:32:44]
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Re: I Just Died
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:37:04 PM AEST
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| hmmm. i know this feeling. i like your poem. i dont like the feeling. i hope it gets better. |
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Re: I Just Died
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by screwup on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:37:10 PM AEST
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what a sad and emotional write pixie... you are loved and will always find a friend in me... you need to talk about anything, you know exactly where I am... great write.
~Deanna |
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Re: I Just Died
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:53:09 PM AEST
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| ahh... how i love ur poetry sweetie... its so in ur face and descriptive hehe, marvellous job, excellent write. |
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Re: I Just Died
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:57:58 PM AEST
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'A moment ago I just died,
Now I am the grim reapers bride'
awesome! very good write. i liked it much. nice rhyming. i love the first two lines.
¤~::.. a n d e ..::~¤ |
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Re: I Just Died
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:06:59 PM AEST
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Really touching.......
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: I Just Died
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:24:24 PM AEST
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| i know how you feel as well pixie. you've expressed it wonderfully, but am truthly sorry for you that yo feel this way. |
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Re: I Just Died
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by tormentedpixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:31:49 PM AEST
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great work! As always! i loved this one. has to be my one my favs. fav part was the beginnin
"A moment ago I just died,
Now I am the grim reapers bride,"
Great write pixie! ^_^
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Re: I Just Died
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by Dorian on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:54:49 PM AEST
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(((((((4 pixie))))))))) sorry 4 your pain pixie, a verry
well written epitab, but hope u stay around a little
longer, like say 4 ever . . . dorian : ) |
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Re: I Just Died
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:05:58 PM AEST
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argh, beautifully tragic
whats going on? Is it mark?
is that a silly question?
: s
5/5 x |
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Re: I Just Died
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by tifrob on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:46:47 PM AEST
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Pixie you have the ability to write truly tragic decripitive poetry. You are very talented and it seems very sad. I am sorry for your saddness. Good luck.
J~ |
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Re: I Just Died
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:54:52 PM AEST
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| Very well written. |
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Re: I Just Died
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:00:48 AM AEST
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Haunting words... It's such a shame that no one bothers to listen to another until it's too late...
Hugs,
Hur |
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