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The Very Last Time
Contributed by
Angela
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Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:18:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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and i said i'd never make you cry,
and that tonight would be the very last time.
so we danced under palm trees,
and you stepped on my dress.
we savored our time,
and held remembrance of what we loved best-
when you made me smile more times than i can possibly count,
and it was under your breath when you said,
"you look gorgeous"
well, i have to confess,
i told you "my situation, its complicated"
and you said that you could understand.
then you looked me in the eye and smiled-
now im missing that again.
the way you laugh at everything,
the way you look me square in the eye,
the way you're pleasant to be around,
the way that when you're touching me,
i couldn't care if i were to die.
Copyright ©
Angela
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2004-10-10 11:18:45]
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Re: The Very Last Time
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by pixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:21:09 AM AEST
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awwww a lovely, sad and beautiful poem, thnaks for sharing,
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Re: The Very Last Time
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by carmen_queasy on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:24:51 AM AEST
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| *hugs* it's very vivid. |
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Re: The Very Last Time
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by tormentedpixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:38:08 PM AEST
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| Lovely! Great write. ^_^ |
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Re: The Very Last Time
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by Dorian on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 04:16:49 PM AEST
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this is a verry compelling poem, your certaily not
dancing around any issues, a fine peice of writting
and a mature sence of style . . . Dorian : )
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