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We Will Become Angels
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:02:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Take me with you when you die,
Don’t leave me alone here to cry,
Take me with you when you leave,
In your death I never want to grieve.
We will live or die as one,
Never alone do I want to face the sun,
I want to walk hand in hand,
Without you with me life would be bland.
When you close your eyes for your last sleep,
In my heart is where I’ll forever keep,
My love for you is what makes me grow,
In heaven with you I want to go.
We will become angels together,
Leaving each other’s side, never,
Sitting upon our fluffy white clouds,
Loving each other, not making any sound.
Mark you’ll never leave my side,
Inside your soul is where I want to hide
Our love will live on even in our death,
Love knows not how to take its last breath.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-10-10 11:02:12]
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Re: We Will Become Angels
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by carmen_queasy on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:26:30 AM AEST
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| This is really beautiful :) |
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Re: We Will Become Angels
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:25:49 PM AEST
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beautifil work pixie, i love the whole idea of loving each other so much that you could go together ( without being suicidal!) well written.
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Re: We Will Become Angels
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by Dorian on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:00:24 PM AEST
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a beautiful poem in the tradition of romeo and juliet
splendid peice of writting pixie as usual . . .
Dorian : ) |
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Re: We Will Become Angels
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:05:03 PM AEST
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Oh how very beautiful Pixie. Loved how you wanted to be together for all time.. a love so strong wonderful
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx |
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Re: We Will Become Angels
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:31:33 PM AEST
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Sweetly touching......
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: We Will Become Angels
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by tifrob on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:55:11 PM AEST
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"Love knows not how to take its last breath." I love that line ~ Because I believe it's true. Great Job.
J~
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