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look at me
Contributed by
aud
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:58:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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( it might be kind of confusing, eaither u get it or u dont)
look at me now
i've came so far, but i havnt moved an inch
all i can think is, why? and how?
every moment with you i try to clinch
but everything else just takes it away
i hate going back, to where i am without you
to come back home, full of dismay
i only wish to be with you, the one i value
look at me now
i feel so caught up in life
i want to forget everything else
just cut i with a knife!
look at me now
i love you, only you
it will be just us, somehow
forget the rest
i'm sick of being depressed
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aud
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2004-10-10 09:58:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: look at me
(User Rating: 1 ) by emocutie07 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:24:27 AM AEST (User
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awesome write, full of emotion..very strong ...5 Stars : ) |
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