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don't need pity from the dead
Contributed by
Rxqueen
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:14:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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wrapping around my heart.
you coiled your pain and squeezed the life from my broken down body.
A soul, scarred from time and time agains...
I wish upon a star of mythological meaning for a chance at new beginnings.
If only I could go back...
But sorrow spreads itself like darkness across the open plane of my existance and even the strength to wish has been opressed by you.
An unquenched desire to live free strangles me untill I lay lifeless on the floor.
You look down, you cowardly coward, and spit your poison in my eyes as all I can do is let tears run down my bruised ckeeks.
I need no pity from evil, you will only build me back up to rip a hole in my soul and kick me back down to the dirt where I belong.
I am dirt
dark
dry
meaningless.
you however are under me
You are dead
you are dead to me...
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
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2004-10-10 09:14:39]
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Re: don't need pity from the dead
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by pixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:17:13 AM AEST
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a very sad and pained write, well expresed,
pixie xx |
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Re: don't need pity from the dead
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by tormentedpixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:59:46 PM AEST
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| Wow. . . that's all i can say. Great write. ^_^ |
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Re: don't need pity from the dead
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by Dorian on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:06:02 PM AEST
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such sadness in a beautiful peice of writting sorry
4 your pain (((((4 u ))))) . . . Dorian : ) |
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Re: don't need pity from the dead
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:46:47 PM AEST
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| an unquenched desire to live free strangles me until lay lifeless on the floor.........whew.......did that ever hit home....if they could only feel for a moment how they leave us....it lasts a lifetime for us......literally.....really good write |
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Re: don't need pity from the dead
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:57:19 PM AEST
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Heart wrenching! Loved the last stanza especially. Very well done.
Laurie |
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Re: don't need pity from the dead
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 03:12:33 AM AEST
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| No one word can describe how great this poem is ... I loved it and felt the pain. |
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