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Listen!
Contributed by
devil_child
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 05:45:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Everytime I try
to talk
you don't care what I say
when I want
to speak my mind
you look the other way
I stand up here
infront of you
to say what I think and feel
you laugh and point
and leave me standing
like my thoughts aren't even real
you always tell me
not to smoke
and not to drink and drive
I open my mouth
but you don't hear a thing
you act like i'm not alive
I want to be heard
and voice my opinions
so everyone will know where I stand
i'm tired of always
being ignored
so I don't ask, I demand!
I demand that you treat me
like everyone else
though I am only 15
I demand you make
my opinions count
I want to be heard and seen
your going to hear
what I have to say
my thoughts will bloom and glisten
there's no more of me
not being included
your finally going to listen!
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devil_child
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Re: Listen!
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:07:40 AM AEST
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| Good poem, shows a girl blooming to a woman. keep up the good work. |
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Re: Listen!
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:45:33 AM AEST
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A powerful write.
Breaking the bonds of servitude, in a relationship, raising to the fight, and demanding for the right to exist rather than be nothing but a shadow of who you really are.
Awesome poem, I enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Listen!
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by girish on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:20:06 AM AEST
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| read my poem "Wish to obtain the foremost place?"you would never demand such things. |
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Re: Listen!
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:10:16 AM AEST
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| good for you!!! age is not relevant.....feelings are.....we all live by our life experience .....and fifteen is a lot of long years waiting for someone to get a clue....sure...you've got a long way to go....so do the rest of us.... :) ....be proud of your voice and never lose it.....embrace your strength.....and never stop writing....you communicate and manipulate your words well........ |
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Re: Listen!
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by shanarah on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:18:57 AM AEST
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| really good write, great topic. take care shanarah... |
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