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Tears
Contributed by
devil_child
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 05:35:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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These tears
they burn
like the red hot fire
of hell
they tear at my flesh
ripping it from my bones
scorching my soul
they bury me
under their hurt and pain
drowning my existance
under a wave of regret
I try
so hard
to stop
crying
but I can't
I am weak
I break and fall
my hand reaches out
for anyone
to pull me from this torment
but everyone else
is already gone
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devil_child
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2004-10-10 05:35:02]
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Re: Tears
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by pixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:41:58 AM AEST
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wow powerful and tragic write, sorry for your pain,
pixie xx |
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Re: Tears
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:47:40 AM AEST
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| You have a good way of expressing your words, turning them into a powerful tool to unleash the hurt from within. Well written poem. |
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Re: Tears
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:12:36 AM AEST
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| ...but everyone else is already gone...mmmmm yes...i know this feeling well.......i like the way you wrote this..... |
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