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Puddles
Contributed by
devil_child
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 05:24:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I sit outside
the rain falls down
raindrops on the sidewalk
make no sound
puddles form
as time passes by
dark clouds hover
in the sky
I sigh a little
and smile to
for all the while
i'm thinking of you
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2004-10-10 05:24:19]
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Re: Puddles
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:49:30 AM AEST
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Nothing special, hmm must be special of your thoughts dwell on someone :D
Awesome poem, enjoyed it. |
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Re: Puddles
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:05:23 AM AEST
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Aww, this is special! It's cute. I like it a lot. You're a great writer!
Katie |
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Re: Puddles
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by MemeCaroline on
Friday, 23rd November 2007 @ 02:49:16 PM AEST
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| Very sweet. |
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