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Silence
Contributed by
ah
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Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:54:47 AM in AEST
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The floating leaf drifts away from the dwelling of peace. Carried by a soft breeze of promise, away it went gently with a scent of fall. A shade of yellow in a sea of red, it silently screams of loneliness out of beauty.
Fragmented thoughts pieced into a broken mirror. On it, the blurred outline of bare self. Who am I? Cracks branched off as an overpowering hand beyond the borders of reflection. The grip persists over a brief eternity. Broken.
Surrendering to illogical sensibility with a blend of exhilaration and apprehension, I leaped off the green lioness connecting two worlds. The leaf is free again ever so briefly. Gliding down to the blue open arms of the bustling sea gracefully. A dignified decent.
In the cradle of the sea, only waves of curving warmth. Looking through a blue lens, I’ve seen too much pain. Yearning to return to innocence is a realization of impossibility. I search for wisdom. I found it in silence, a perfect synchronicity of words that connect the souls.
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Re: Silence
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:52:46 AM AEST
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reading this poem gave me the feeling of it being a mystical write, of a mind reaching into other realms, following a path of seeking.
Awesome write, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Silence
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by MM on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:44:29 AM AEST
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| reading your poetry always makes me realize that u can express each feeling of yours completely, with an image like no other. not many ppl can do that. u have a gift. nice work :) |
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Re: Silence
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 05:20:11 PM AEST
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~:*beautiful*:~ hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Silence
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:46:00 AM AEST
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This is really beautiful. Great Write.
Take care
- Becca |
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