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Thunder
Contributed by
Bruce
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Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:48:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I looked up at my computer screen, and much to my delight
Two lovely ladies were there, what a beautiful sight
The dark haired one I had seen before, the redhead for the first time
The two of them together, a view that was sublime
Far across the oceans, in a land that is downunder
These two ladies reside, together they are like Thunder
I can just hear the Thunder, before the lightning strikes
Is there anything about them, that a man could possibly dislike
It is hard to tell when you hear the Thunder, and you are in a storm
But I think both of these ladies, a tempest they could transform
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-10-10 04:48:36]
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Re: Thunder
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by shelby on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 05:21:41 AM AEST
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sweet write Bruce
Michelle |
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Re: Thunder
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by pixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:43:52 AM AEST
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lovely write Bruce, beautiful words,
pixie xx |
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Re: Thunder
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:54:57 AM AEST
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| Temptation twin delights, :) beautiful poem written so well. |
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Re: Thunder
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by shanarah on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 08:52:49 AM AEST
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very pretty, you have a great style here! take care,
shanarah... |
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Re: Thunder
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:09:07 PM AEST
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There is that saying Bruce lightening doesent strike twice lol.
Great poem
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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