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The Tapestry
Contributed by
Archie
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:37:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Spin the emerald yarn
Make it soft like fleece
Add to it many colors
gold and red and green
Make a pattern on it
a bueatiful Lanscape
so bright and full of solace
a peaceful tranquil place
Make it large and reagal
border it in red
Expand its edges to the stars
embroider them in pearls
Its edges shall never fray
its colors never tarnish
Full value it shall always have
when it is sold at market
Warm the broken heart with it
Remind them as they sew
A bueatiful tapestry
has been to them bestowed
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-10-10 04:37:57]
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Re: The Tapestry
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:59:50 AM AEST
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History of life, a begining through thread, color and blended by love, Tapestry to the soul.
Ah well it is just the way I see what is within your words, no doubt others will ses it differently.
Beautifully written, and with flow, passion and style, cool poem. |
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Re: The Tapestry
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by shanarah on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 08:56:56 AM AEST
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very visual and deep, great write. take care,
shanarah... |
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Re: The Tapestry
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by Dorian on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:23:57 PM AEST
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this poem is verry nice in deed thanks 4 gracing the page with it archie . . . Dorian : )
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Re: The Tapestry
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:09:33 PM AEST
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Fabulous words Archie loved this as I do all your work.
Thanks for sharing
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx |
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