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Pool Frog
Contributed by
Rxqueen
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:57:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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everytime I look deep into your eyes
I seem to see crystal blue water rippling in them
they are deep like a chlorine filled swimming pool
that sometimes gets a poor little frog trapped in its filter
your eyes trap me in them like that poor little frog
I couldn't get out if I tried
maybe someday, some little girl will see me
and cry for her daddy to SAVE ME
save me...
but by then it will be too late
so I just give in and accept my destiny
I am your little trapped pool frog
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
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2004-10-10 02:57:20]
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Re: Pool Frog
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by pixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 08:33:30 AM AEST
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awww that was so cute, i liked it alot..
pixie xx |
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Re: Pool Frog
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by Dorian on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:30:55 PM AEST
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what a beauty that was, i was reading that and felt like i was next 2 a pond in a medow amidst the quiet of the day thank u quite refreshing i must say.
Dorian : ) |
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Re: Pool Frog
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 03:03:11 AM AEST
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| I was pulled into the person's eyes, but I couldn't figure out who it was. Well written and great job once again! |
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Re: Pool Frog
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 10:59:08 PM AEST
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| I could see this picture clear in my mind. Wonderful job. *S* Cynthia |
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