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Every breath, Every heartbeat
Contributed by
vondutchchick08
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Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:16:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I sit in the cold, dark night
and think to myself...
will anyone love me the way I love them?
will I ever have the chance to experience love at its best?
the thoughts run through my head
and tears fall down my cheeks
with every breath, and every heart beat,
I wish to myself that one day someone will love me
but wishes are useless to me, for they never come true...
because if they did...i'd have someone to love like you.
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vondutchchick08
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2004-10-10 02:16:23]
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Re: Every breath, Every heartbeat
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:34:19 AM AEST
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| Ohh a cute poem |
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Re: Every breath, Every heartbeat
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by Dizza_13 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:54:23 AM AEST
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very sweet poem, sometimes i feel this way aswell
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Re: Every breath, Every heartbeat
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by Archie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:54:09 AM AEST
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| Hmm, I think you are being too hard on yourself on both accounts. |
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Re: Every breath, Every heartbeat
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:18:34 PM AEST
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Your handle interested me, so I looked, regardless of the poem title.
I'll say this poem connected with me, on a personal level, with the final line. You had me misreading it, and perhaps unconsciously so, which is amusing me now, I must say.
Do you think that's 'cheesy'? |
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