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-hard to get-
Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:26:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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heavy eyes
lonley times
heads in clouds
hearts in throats
odds are against me
its worth a try
is this romance chemical
is it bleeding me dry
smiles stuck on plastered faces
fire excites and smoke fills
burning desires dieing fires
blind faith crucified liars
try too hard
hard to try
smiles lie
we died
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2004-10-10 01:26:22]
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Re: -hard to get-
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by Rxqueen on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:43:34 AM AEST
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Simply stated and to the point. An good point at that... I really liked it. "try too hard
hard to try" my fav line...
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Re: -hard to get-
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:46:39 PM AEST
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Wow.. i loved the flow of this
it touched me
thats what i always look out for
plus a certian unique style
with words and patterns
you achieved those
5 out of 5 |
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Re: -hard to get-
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by Cindy359 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 04:51:10 PM AEST
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| The words flow nice here.Lots of thought went into this one. What happens next..keep them coming. |
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