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the way I would like to die
Contributed by
olasunkanmi
on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This is the way I'd like to die
If you must know
I would like to go when the stars are visible
and the fowls gone to roost
playing a tone along the nightingale
with a shaky voice
I would like to go when I'm due
and my death can't be felt
when I'm worn out
hobbling on all legs
posing like a golfer
with a sinking neck
weary in body and mind
with my sight dim to sunlight
and my cheecks sag to the extreme
seeing my death coming
yet embracing it in a cold of happiness
leaving behind dried eyes
with inner tears of joy.
olasunkanmi rasheed igbalajobi
kanmmy2@yahoo.com
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olasunkanmi
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2002-11-14 17:00:00]
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Re: the way I would like to die
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by OreO on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 09:59:12 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful way you have
expressed how you want to pass on
out of this world, I really enjoyed
reading this, it's absolutely beautiful
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: the way I would like to die
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 10:43:56 PM AEST
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Nicely done,we'd all like to go peacefully!
Christina |
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Re: the way I would like to die
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by Tyes on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 11:37:26 PM AEST
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Nice to know there's another Nigerian out there.
Especially love the last two lines - That would definitely be the way to go ! |
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Re: the way I would like to die
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by lost_word on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 04:56:33 PM AEST
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| another great write and a great way to go, when u have nothing more to give. |
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Re: the way I would like to die
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by olasunkanmi on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 04:19:36 PM AEST
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I really appreciate your comment. Keep the love flowing.
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Re: the way I would like to die
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by olasunkanmi on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 04:24:36 PM AEST
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| I do appreciate your comment,Is fun.Knowing fellow creative mind |
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Re: the way I would like to die
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by olasunkanmi on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 04:27:14 PM AEST
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| Thank you pal,I appreciate your comment. |
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