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Falling
Contributed by
eternallyloved
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:36:48 PM in AEST
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If I fall,
I'll trust you to catch me,
rescue me from myself,
carry me through this place.
If I fall,
will you fall with me,
hold me close, protect me,
tumble with me through time.
If I fall,
I will give myself to you,
I am overcome with vulnerability,
I cant stand to be hurt again.
If I fall,
I wont be able to get up,
make sure this is what you want,
make sure you want to be on that level.
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eternallyloved
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2004-10-09 23:36:48]
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Re: Falling
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:58:14 PM AEST
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Very well written and we all wonder this from time to time.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Falling
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:17:53 AM AEST
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| good write. |
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Re: Falling
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by SugimotoYouki on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 11:51:18 PM AEST
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wonderful read
so much honesty and gentleness... |
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