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Feelings
Contributed by
Trisha
on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 09:41:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am messed up inside my problems.
I am feeling I can't understand Why
I'm feeling this I don't know
my problem are getting worse but
No one can see it.
I hold me feelings inside me
feelings inside me
Afraid of what people might
Think or say I have feelings
I'm afraid to speak.
Although the feelings I hold
are so very deep!
I need major help and everyone
can see that don't wanna speak
away so I'll keep more probelms
away from my family.
I'm so afriad of myself.
I don't wanna hurt me then things
will get better.
Copyright ©
Trisha
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2004-10-09 21:41:21]
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Re: Feelings
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by n2dep2care on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:57:00 PM AEST
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Passionate Plea! I can feel the pain in this write. Powerful and moving. Your writing is the best way to release pent-up feelings. Just let them all go onto paper. Be true, be honest and above all keep writing!
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Re: Feelings
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:45:32 PM AEST
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| i think the style needs work, but other than that great write. |
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Re: Feelings
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:29:59 PM AEST
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Hey girl,
U gotta be yourself and each-n-everyone of your feelings and thoughts are very importent.
I f ya need a friend, I'm here.
luv, huggs,
emystar@msn.com |
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Re: Feelings
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:14:09 PM AEST
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Hey, Trisha! This is wonderful, but if it's the way you are feeling, I can relate and if you ever need help feel free to message me! Hang in there!
Katie |
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