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A Daddy's Gift
Contributed by
tifrob
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 08:04:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Hand in hand ~ Large holds small,
Daddy and daughter ~ His babydoll,
From infancy to little girl,
She was his entire world,
As she grew ~ So did dad,
Their love weaved into a plaid,
Pre-teen years and little girl tears,
Met with a father's fears,
Fears that only fathers know,
Fears that they never show,
Teen years come and boys are met,
A dad can sense his biggest threat,
A young lady soon evolves,
And daddy has lost his babydoll,
She has grown and so has he,
Their plaid of love still being weaved.
~~~
Years do pass and life is lived,
Each day of life became a gift,
Dad grew older and needed more,
From the little girl that he adored,
Hand in hand ~ Strong holds frail,
Daughter and daddy ~ In “Goodbye Hell”.
~~~
The tartan weave is all that’s left,
Memories of love ~ A Daddy’s Gift.
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tifrob
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Re: A Daddy's Gift
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 09:13:54 PM AEST
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| amazing and powerful write. written with excellence. |
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Re: A Daddy's Gift
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:51:45 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: A Daddy's Gift
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by pixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 06:59:06 AM AEST
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wow an awesome write, left me quite speechless,
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Re: A Daddy's Gift
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by Seans_Girl on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 02:52:51 AM AEST
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you're such a wonderful poet! Again a great write by you!
Natalie |
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Re: A Daddy's Gift
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 06:22:34 PM AEST
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wow, this gave me chills..... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A Daddy's Gift
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:24:06 PM AEST
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This is wonderful... and so very touching. And this...
Hand in hand ~ Strong holds frail,
Daughter and daddy ~ In “Goodbye Hell”.
... left me without words enough. Hold on to those memories - a memory of love is a treasure. As is this.
- SNM
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