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Dad
Contributed by
rhef3
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:57:24 PM in AEST
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Dad...so many images come to mind
whenever I speak your name;
It seems without you in my life
things have never been the same.
What happened to those lazy days
when I was just a child;
When my life was consumed in you
in your love, and in your smile.
What happened to all those times
when I always looked to you;
No matter what happened in my life
you could make my gray skies blue.
Dad, some days I hear your voice
and turn to see your face;
Yet in my turning...it seems
the sound has been erased.
Dad, who will I turn to for answers
when life does not make sense;
Who will be there to hold me close
when the pieces just don't fit.
Oh, Dad, if I could turn back time
and once more hear your voice;
I'd tell you that out of all the dads
you would still be my choice.
Please always know I love you
and no one can take your place;
Years may come and go
but your memory will never be erased.
Today, Lord, as You are listening
in your home above;
Would you go and find my dad
and give him all my love.
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rhef3
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Re: Dad
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:38:19 PM AEST
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Sad but written well. My own father passed 7 years ago.
only the body leaves as your father is your guardian angel looking over your shoulder.
Great writing.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Dad
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by tifrob on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:33:57 AM AEST
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I have a friend who is loosing her dad right now. I think yor poem may have sumed up all of her feelings. She's having a very hard time. And I don't know how to help her. Your poem is beautiful. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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