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I Have Changed
Contributed by
Apardame
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:37:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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If I could change what I have done, I would
I'm sorry that I have broken your trust
I'm sorry that I have caused you pain
I'm sorry that you have to question whether I am true or not
But I have changed
I saw what it was doing to you,
To us,
To our relationship
I know I have changed the way you feel for me
But please realize what I say is true
I have changed
I love you more then anything in this world and because of this love for you
I have changed
I'm tired of giving you pain
You deserve someone better than me
But before you decide to leave me,
Please realize
I have changed for you
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Apardame
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Re: I Have Changed
(User Rating: 1 ) by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:39:47 PM AEST (User
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This poem is really well written. But I don't think you should have to change for anyone. The person who you wrote it about probably fell in love with you for YOU and not someone who would change for him. This was still very well written though, I like it a lot! Take care.
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Re: I Have Changed
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 09:30:30 PM AEST (User
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excellent write. i agree with katie. sometimes being sorry or changing isnt enough, and sometimes that is a good thing. |
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Re: I Have Changed
(User Rating: 1 ) by tractorbabe on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:30:56 PM AEST (User
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great poem! |
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