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Identity
Contributed by
ElatedNBliss
on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:20:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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When I look into the mirror
I see a blank face
no eyes, no nose, no mouth
nothing, nothing's there
Then I reach for a black pen
and I draw my eyes,
and then my nose
and lips
I curve each corner of my mouth
so that I smile
so that I seem happy
even though I'm not...
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ElatedNBliss
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2004-10-09 18:20:39]
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Re: Identity
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:37:23 PM AEST
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I like this, the whole idea that you have to DRAW yourself is really interesting. I feel the same sometimes. Sometimes, when being around people it seems like you have to click a button and all of a sudden a smile [even though it's fake] appears. Hang in there.
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Re: Identity
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 09:12:26 PM AEST
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| This is so beautiful..... |
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Re: Identity
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 09:32:42 PM AEST
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| powerful write. very nice. kind of reminds me of when i dressed up for halloween as a happy clown. quite a scary experience =] |
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