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Orgasm
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 05:06:58 PM in AEST
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Panting, your breath is hot against my hair.
Your sweat dripping off your forehead
and onto my cheek.
Your sweet, masculine scent turns me on.
I can feel your passion rising,
as is mine.
You drive yourself deeper into me
and I scream.
Not from pain,
but to release the anxiety.
I feel right here, right now,
I've been living for this moment.
I reach my peak just before
you do yours.
Your teeth sink deep into my neck,
leaving your mark.
I'm yours forever...
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vampyrekiss
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2004-10-09 17:06:58]
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Re: Orgasm
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 09:27:33 PM AEST
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In the shadows, the Voyuer smiles as the blood slowly flows down your delicate neck.Hmm love the way this one flows....
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Re: Orgasm
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by valentine on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:04:11 PM AEST
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You have expressed sensory pleasure in the most wonderful of ways. Weaving purity with the impure passion. . . .
I didn't want it to end *blushes like a rose* . .
Very good write.
~*~ Valentine~*~
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Re: Orgasm
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by Deathly_Rose on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:08:22 PM AEST
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Erotic
I loved this poem, yet another of the ones I have read... If only people would read all of your poems and put what they think.. because I think that the poems that you have written( the ones that i've read) are extremely well written, and that people should put more time into thinking on how that poem came to be.
keep up the great work ^.^
-waves-
*~Alicia~* |
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Re: Orgasm
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 12:54:44 PM AEST
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i'm very impressed with such talent that flows within your veins...how you captured such a passionate moment so greatly in so few words...beautiful...
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