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Feel This Numbness In My Eyes
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 04:51:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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forever never started
love was once departed
truth lied to me in my face
and i knew that the end of the world was going to end as soon as i came
love is now a rumor
a painstaking tumor
a memory of you
that tortures my inner being like once alone in the night
praise ran away from me
joy has now become deadly
another knife to stick in me
i give up... the end has started to finish my life in pieces
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2004-10-09 16:51:50]
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Re: Feel This Numbness In My Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 05:13:07 PM AEST
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Jer, as always a moving and heartfelt write
We need a party lol
TY Kell xx
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Re: Feel This Numbness In My Eyes
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:02:25 AM AEST
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| excellent write. this piece didnt seem so forced with the rhymes, very nice. |
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