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EMPTINESS WITHIN
Contributed by
jeannoh
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 03:42:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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EMPTINESS WITHIN
I have made a few discoveries
about some people that I know
it's time to turn them loose
true feelings start to show
Truth is hard to come by
though its searched for all our lives
but in fact if it doesn't matter
Tell me why then do we strive
Always trusting in people
just a struggle to fit in
failures ever mounting
Left with emptiness felt within
My thoughts still grow with frustration
aching to be understood
Do you think they're really listening
does it really do any good
Reaching out to those around us
only scared to open doors
they say they really care and
yet you hear from them no more
afraid to get involved
scared to let your feelings out
tell me my good friend
do you know what i am talking about?
written by
Jean Marie Boudreau
Copyright ©
jeannoh
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2004-10-09 15:42:21]
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Re: EMPTINESS WITHIN
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by Chade on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 03:53:35 PM AEST
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wow. I no exactly what you mean. The truth opens more doors then it closes.
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Re: EMPTINESS WITHIN
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:07:20 AM AEST
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| I've been there before and definitely can relate with you with this poem. Great write! And I hope you'lll feel better soon. Take care pal. |
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Re: EMPTINESS WITHIN
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:31:22 AM AEST
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| brilliant and amazing write. ::applauds:: excellently written ::jealous:: this was very powerful and yes i do know what you are talking about ::sigh:: |
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