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0utcast
Contributed by
Quilted_rag_doll
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:30:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Not an angel, not a devil,
just another creature that dwells,
a breath away from heaven,
yet on the borderline of hell.
Heaven will not accept me,
my soul is far too tattered.
hell will not permit me,
my mind is completly shattered.
Out of the golden haven thrown,
into firey pits i'm cast,
only to be thrown out again,
into an abyss, dark and vast.
So aimlessly i wander,
following no set path,
and if you listen, you can hear,
the echoing of my hollow laugh.
Copyright ©
Quilted_rag_doll
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2004-10-09 12:30:32]
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Re: 0utcast
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by n2dep2care on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:43:26 PM AEST
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Sad and haunting piece. I can relate to the mood of your write. You expressed it with wonderful emotion.
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Re: 0utcast
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 03:10:40 PM AEST
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This piece was so awesome! It is quite haunting. I really like it because I'm sure everyone feels like that. Great work!
Katie |
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Re: 0utcast
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:54:42 AM AEST
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| amazing write. |
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Re: 0utcast
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by Spike on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:21:42 AM AEST
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Hmmm. Interesting write. Existence is sheer purgatory? Whatever motivated the poem, I really enjoyed it.
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Re: 0utcast
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:26:44 PM AEST
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I Loved it!!!! awesome write!!
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears
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