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WaRpEd AnD tWiStEd
Contributed by
caliente
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:07:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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harsh words and silent blows
hidden secrets nobody knows
eyes are open, hands are fisted
deep inside im warped and twisted
so many tricks and so many lies
too many whens and too many whys
nobody's special, nobodys gifted
im just me warped and twisted
sleeping awake and choking on a dream
listening loudly to a silent scream
call my mind, the numbers unlisted
lost in someone warped and twisted
on my knees, alive but dead
look at the invisible blood ive bled
im not gone my mind has drifted
dont expect much im warped and twisted
burnt out, wasted, empty and hollow
today is just yesterdays tomorrow
the sun died out, the ashes sifted
im still here warped and twisted
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2004-10-09 10:07:19]
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Re: WaRpEd AnD tWiStEd
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by pixie on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:08:41 AM AEST
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excellent write and excellent flow,
pixie xx |
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Re: WaRpEd AnD tWiStEd
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by inoc on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:49:31 AM AEST
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I agree with pixie
cheers!~ |
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Re: WaRpEd AnD tWiStEd
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:03:59 AM AEST
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| a powerfull poem well written and greatfully read |
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Re: WaRpEd AnD tWiStEd
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:48:23 PM AEST
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| Great..love the cadence... |
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Re: WaRpEd AnD tWiStEd
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:03:38 AM AEST
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| i agree with pixie as well =] |
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