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sick sad puppy
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 08:05:25 AM in AEST
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sick sad puppy....
the dog runs and rolls in the grass
then he eats the grass
and throws it up
foamy green strings of grass
*gaggy noises*
mouth wide open
hunched over
tail down
sick sad puppy
he licks his throw up from the ground
his eyes turn red and watery
*gaggy noises*
strings hanging out of mouth
foam dripping to the ground
sick sad puppy...
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Re: sick sad puppy
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:05:34 AM AEST
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| I like this one cute imagery and an undercurrent of addiction, really nice work this is one of the most entertaining poems ive read on the site |
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Re: sick sad puppy
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by Dorian on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:38:08 PM AEST
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splendidly stated, lets not 4get he licks his crotch and the gives us a kiss, lol, i have a chocalate lab
who would give her life 2 protect me, try getting that from a human let alone a kiss, a vivid masterpeice . . .
Ben : ) * * * * * * * * * * |
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Re: sick sad puppy
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 02:59:24 AM AEST
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| This poem was stated extremely well. I am really enjoying your poems!!! |
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