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Dreams Wash Away
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:59:36 AM in AEST
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Thee ocean changes over time,
Thee sand dies away with a dream,
Ever seen a perfect dream wash away over time?
Ever wandered what makes this life go on forever?
Like the light in the sky,
Like the sand through the fingers,
Watching time change with seasen,
Watching time ticing every second away,
Past to future,
Old with new,
Drop a pebble in a lake,
Drop a wish for a dream,
Then watch it wash away,
Then see the wish you say,
These dreams wash away with time,
These vision only make us wander,
Is this world really a dream or a nightmare.
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2004-10-09 06:59:36]
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Re: Dreams Wash Away
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:58:16 AM AEST
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ooo..i like this one! It says alot about dreams and wishes. i love that last line.
'Is this world really a dream or a nightmare.'
it is a very good question, that of which many seek the answer to. very good, great work!
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Re: Dreams Wash Away
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by Jenn2004 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 02:18:00 PM AEST
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| I love your poem, i like how u compare dreams to the ocean. |
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