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2-cold stars(poem)

Contributed by cauchy3 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 05:40:51 AM in AEST
Topic: Event

2-cold stars
More native then words and alphabets

Violets are smiles and yellow are star

Debate with times but complete our visions

Sweep the skirts and wash the river

Instruct the talks we praise them

Throw our holy tennis on decks

Trap our mind and expose our truths

Blow of shines are the moneys that hushed

The sun is hot ball in fire

Reach our star on term of fines

Struggle in dark but leap in lights

Lively are colors soft and slim

Slimy are men bright are stars

Hype on stripper but truth in galaxy

Galahad on horse or lights in rays

Soft is moon mighty is mars

Magic are false but wheelers are turned

Waters are cool and moon is fun

Stars are to sigh and people on heel

Stagy are men when heads are below

Fathers are stars thoughts are elope

By painting by words and by poems

Glorify us as stars and fire in steel

Flow of bloods as regimes of ideas

Allege to earth but swear to stats

Bar to liar and laws to start

Swear to star and good to ever

Fairies are cherries with our cheer

Some stars profane but some rules are bad

If ices are not cold then tastes are added

Stars are cold and lives in challenge

Histories will flee and times will change

-------poem by Cheung shun sang=cauchy3--------

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Re: 2-cold stars(poem) (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:19:47 AM AEST
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aesthetically good, has potential... curious, must you be so deliberate to the point of misunderstanding?!? reads like a quotebook mushed together. it's good, but i'm so lost... maybe i'm just tired.

-smelly_man!

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