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Now forget your life once more
Contributed by
row
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 03:19:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What's this?
Lush Lips kiss?
Love we all miss?
It's not really my call
Day after day
and day after day
I will admire your way
Surrender and fray
Float as a snow flake
Tied down, nailed by a stake
Stripped naked your a fake
Guilt is not realy for heaven's sake
It's jusr a manhunt
and by the end
they see through your little stunt
nothing we'll comprehend
Rain will flood the drains
and evermore will settle the score
For the core you'll over bore
And again, hear me once more
Rain will flood the drains
and evermore will settle the score
For the core you'll over bore
Now forget your life once more
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row
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2004-10-09 03:19:14]
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Re: Now forget your life once more
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:10:54 AM AEST
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| This is really good, its sunk in and im sure will come out in something I do later on, rain will flood the drains, that is a great line, nice one inspirational |
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Re: Now forget your life once more
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by Remy on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 11:48:46 AM AEST
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rhyming's nice, the message so much more. great writing!
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Re: Now forget your life once more
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by CAUGHTinAdream on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 03:10:52 PM AEST
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| This is really great. I like the message it gives. Keep up the good work =) |
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