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CLeaNSiNG THuNDeRSToRM
Contributed by
xSlashXPrettyXSkinx
on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 02:45:25 AM in AEST
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Images of lightning erase all memory
Of the prison behind my eyes
As the thunder loses momentum
To the baracade of obvious lies.
Winds I once believed in ar enow buried
Under all of his possessive ways
Almost as under valued as the raindrops
That have been cleaning my face for days.
Determined to get the best of me
Anyway he possibly can
I hide out in the thunderstorm, undiscovered
Naturing replacing the comfort of a man.
Rain is drenching my hair
From bathing in it way too long
At least now my soul is clean of you
These black clouds make me strong.
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Re: CLeaNSiNG THuNDeRSToRM
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:34:41 AM AEST
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Good read here..I liked it alot..
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Re: CLeaNSiNG THuNDeRSToRM
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by Clarity_Rising on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 08:22:38 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed your poem and how you connected it to nature. I thought that it was very creative. |
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Re: CLeaNSiNG THuNDeRSToRM
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by Jet on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:18:36 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem. Good writing. |
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