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I'll Never Froget
Contributed by
fallenangel113
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Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 02:00:05 AM in AEST
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I'll never froget the sun's warm glow. I'll never froget the wind's soft cool whisper in my ear. I'll never froget the bird's sweet song. I'll never froget the day when our words made us hurt each other. I'll never froget the sharpness of your tounge as it pierced my heart. I'll never froget the way the rain hid my tears as you pulled out a gun from behind your back. All I heard was the sound of thunder then the screams. I fell to the ground, I was bleeding. I heard you say "oh my love... what have I done!" I'll never forget the way you held me in the hospital room. You were crying but not for yourself as many thought but you were crying for me. I didn't press charges you were glad but still sad. The Doc. said that I wouldn't live long. But the birds still sing our song. The sun still has it's warm glow, and now the wind whispers in your ear "I still love you."
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Re: I'll Never Froget
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by EternitysLyre on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 02:20:26 AM AEST
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If this is neophile spelling taken to peculiar extremities, my words will fail me. I assume you're aware of the spelling errors, and the fact that this is more of one long paragraph than anything else, but the amazingly rushed pace and atmosphere it creates suggests difficulties in life, so I can only offer my condolences...
And a dictionary. |
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Re: I'll Never Froget
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 10:20:09 AM AEST
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Hahaha EternitysLyre god funny stuff, I didnt notice them. The poem is really gritty and harsh it seems to be about a painfull breakup I really like way you wrote this
"I'll never froget the sharpness of your tounge as it pierced my heart"
well written |
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