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WHAT IS A LIE
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:41:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A promise often made, yet never kept-
Now from the heart a tear that has been wept-
Or a soft spoken word that once was given to me-
Filled with deceit which love was not able to see…
A memory lingering in the back of the mind-
Without substance that any one could find-
Or so time has come to make it seem…
For what we once shared was only a dream-
A gentle touch given from a warm hand-
Backed by hidden desires filled with demand-
Formed into words softly spoken and sweet-
Filling the heart with a passionate beat…
A portion of my life, not long ago in the past-
When you held my heart and my love fast-
Then you turned and quickly walked away-
And ended the game you had begun to play…
A lie is an emotion one uses to dominate-
And once it is woven it changes another’s fate-
For it will cause more damage than good-
Leaving another to feel more pain than they should …
(10-8-2004)
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Re: WHAT IS A LIE
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:47:15 PM AEST
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So true. Good work.
My dad use to say if ya tell one lie then u have to tell another to back it up. Also u remember truth but u don't remember a lie.
luv, huggs, truth,
emy |
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Re: WHAT IS A LIE
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:52:23 PM AEST
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| amazing write. very true indeed. you presented this excellently. |
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Re: WHAT IS A LIE
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by Dezchapm on
Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 10:40:35 AM AEST
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| the poem is 100% true |
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