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Kiss the stars with you
Contributed by
emocutie07
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:55:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Entwined we lay hushed, as darkness grasps us from the world
The sky confides its deepest secrets, spreading an intricate blanket, over are hearts
Shooting stars dance among the clouds, whispering their lullabyes
Slumber lures us in, and slowly we drift off to sleep.....
Feeling the rays of sun cascading against my face, I awake, already missing the night
Turning to you my insides melt, are stars dancing brightly in your eyes
Kissing you tenderly....I smile...anticipating the next time I'll kiss the stars with you
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Re: Kiss the stars with you
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:59:07 PM AEST
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| I like this. "Kiss the stars with you" is very picturesque. Cheers! |
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Re: Kiss the stars with you
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by shanarah on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:07:48 PM AEST
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comfort by romance, great write.
take care,
shanarah... |
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Re: Kiss the stars with you
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by cauchy3 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 02:02:19 AM AEST
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| For star i speak no more because there is blows of shines like hush-moneys |
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Re: Kiss the stars with you
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by Remy on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 08:07:33 PM AEST
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oi pa... gives me the evening shivers! saucy! i love it!
-smelly_man! |
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Re: Kiss the stars with you
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:14:08 PM AEST
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Well done! A poetic, tender piece. Long live romantic poetry!
The sky confides its deepest secrets, spreading an intricate blanket
Excellent line.
Andrew |
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Re: Kiss the stars with you
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:11:56 AM AEST
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Oh my..
That was amazing
I feeling of warmth flew over me through reading this
5 out of 5. |
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Re: Kiss the stars with you
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 01:29:00 AM AEST
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This is around the millionth time I've read this...I miss you Crystal...This poem is amazing, just as the poet who wrote it is...I love you with all my heart
*kissing you*
Mason |
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