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Dream With Me
Contributed by
shanarah
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:29:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I will paint you a picture
with words from my mind
a picture of beauty
of things we can find
A unicorn on a rainbow
a bird flying free
all creatures of this earth
and those who might be
come join me in fantasy
come into my dreams
enter my world
and help join the theme
together we wander
and create magical things
put your dreams with mine
and see what life brings
Copyright ©
shanarah
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2004-10-08 22:29:26]
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Re: Dream With Me
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by purplestary on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:34:21 PM AEST
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"put your dreams with mine
and see what life brings."
beautiful poem .. may i join you??
awsome write! |
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Re: Dream With Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:41:38 PM AEST
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Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could take all the fantasy in our minds and put it all in the bad things in life and make everything good and everybody happy. I would like to join you. I like your mind.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Dream With Me
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:50:43 PM AEST
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And what a beautiful picture you have painted!! Count me in...I'll join you for sure..
Lovely write..
Jenni |
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Re: Dream With Me
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by mylastwords on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:51:22 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem...you shouldn't envy me...you have a great talent...i just write from the heart which is easy...i write about my emotions... keep writing...coz its beautiful...
luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: Dream With Me
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:16:37 AM AEST
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Very beautifully said.
Good work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Dream With Me
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by gt on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 02:04:19 AM AEST
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| there are a few little rhythm problems, but overall a really nice poem. Very uplifting. Made me feel good, thanks |
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