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Crashing down
Contributed by
quilted_rag_doll
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:08:38 PM in AEST
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Sometimes, I feel like, this world of mine, is crashin down,
As time goes by, I realize, that this world of mine, is fading away.
Why should I go on? Why should I be strong?
I'm wasting time, in this world of mine.
What’s there to live for? I'm crashin down…
Sometimes, I think that, this heart of mine, is breaking apart,
As time goes by, I realize, that this heart of mine,
can’t take anymore.
Why should I go on? Why should I be strong?
I'm wasting time, in this world of mine.
What’s there to live for? I'm crashing down… again
Why go through today? Why look to tomorrow?
What if tomorrow never comes.
There’s nothing to live for, lots to die for…
I’m crashing down…
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2004-10-08 22:08:38]
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Re: Crashing down
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:32:36 PM AEST
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| excellent write. you have some mistakes with using I instead of I'm a lot in this though. theirs plently to live for, and when you die, youre just dead. |
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Re: Crashing down
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:37:18 PM AEST
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opps...lol..i c that now! thankies for pointing those out...i hate making typos...
I'm wasting time, in this world of mine.
What’s there to live for? I'm crashing down
thats what it should say! ^_^ lol..well later...
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Re: Crashing down
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 01:59:35 AM AEST
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| awesome!!! |
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Re: Crashing down
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:14:10 AM AEST
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Great write!!....i Liked it alot!!
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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