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No tomorrow
Contributed by
the_fallen
on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 08:11:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I wake up in the middle of the night
I heard a scream of pain outside
I run outside and saw my family lie on the ground covered in blood
I look up and saw a man with a knife in his hand
I was terrified as I saw this
He comes closer and closer to me
I try to run away, but his friend held me down
I screamed as he came closer
But no one came
I looked around and saw bloody bodies all around
Finally with a quick through my throat, I was dead
Was looking forward to morning
But now…there is no tomorrow
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2004-10-08 20:11:39]
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Re: No tomorrow
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by Dorian on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:53:39 PM AEST
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verry captivating 2 say the least, even more
convincing, great vividness, in a word, awesome.
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Re: No tomorrow
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:56:06 PM AEST
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| good write. =] |
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Re: No tomorrow
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by ll on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:25:17 AM AEST
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| i change my mind of reavealing u k.o the poem is well writen. |
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