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One Step Ahead
Contributed by
Barky
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 05:13:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It's going to happen
Never now
Always one step ahead
The future has never been the present
my happiness
is always one step ahead
Copyright ©
Barky
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2004-10-08 17:13:33]
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Re: One Step Ahead
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by Katie2008 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:35:27 PM AEST
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I love this poem, if I've interepreted right. lol I think it means that no matter what, no matter how hard you try, you can never find your happiness, it's just beyond your grasp? Either way, I still really like this.
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Re: One Step Ahead
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:06:22 PM AEST
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| hah! i found something optomistic in this, and im a pessimist! well anyway, i think that since your happiness is always a step ahead, sooner or later you could run and catch up with it. while if it was a step behind like it is with some, you can never go back to it. its better to step forward than stay in place or walk backwards afterall. =] |
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