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Angel
Contributed by
ElatedNBliss
on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:40:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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None of you can walk in my shoes
you can't handle what I go through
you don't know the meaning of pain
even misery has a name
Walking in the dusk of hatred
don't know if I'll even make it
sometimes I just want to give in
so I'll commit another sin
And when I thought all hope was lost
ready to give in at all cost
you showed up with your pretty face
then I was in my happy place
You showed me how to love again
broke down my walls to let you in
you ease my mind when I can't cope
you are the light that gave me hope
You healed my scars and made me feel
that maybe love can to be real
no matter what the people say
I'll owe you till my dieing day
Becuase of you I breathe again
and I found love in a close friend
even though God does not approve
I can't resist that I need you
You filled my mind withs dreams and peace
now I can sleep and rest in ease
I only want to be alive
if you are there beside my side
And now I sit and wonder how
to prove to you, I'll make a vow
of truth and everlasting love
since your my angel from up above...
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2004-10-08 16:40:01]
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Re: Angel
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:52:11 PM AEST
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| This is great. |
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Re: Angel
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:10:24 PM AEST
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| This touched me on so many levels..Great write...amazaing...thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Angel
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by Yousef on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:56:20 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem indeed, I loved it, I felt every word you said, it's full of emotions, I liked the line that says "you don't know the meaning of pain, even misery has a name". Good effort, keep it up.
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