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starving
Contributed by
haligh
on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i'm laying on the floor of my bedroom
looking up into your crying eyes
does it hurt you to see me dying?
cause you're the one who's killing me
you still say that you love me...forever...
i've never cried so much, or been in so much pain
i can't eat although i'm hungry
it would wash away the taste of you
from that last kiss by your car
before you drove away
so this is how it's ending?
why's this happening to me?
we're in love, can't we be happy?
maybe eventually...
Copyright ©
haligh
... [
2002-11-14 09:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: starving
(User Rating: 1 ) by juliette on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 03:43:50 PM AEST (User
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As simple minded as this sounds you will get past, if not over him.......someday......
I like your poem because I know just what you feel. I love a man who will never be free to love me again. What choices have we but to fall, and fall again?
PS - A surefire way to get him out of your system is to keep putting it to the pen. Tell him whatever you have to say in print......it's theraputic to say the least.... |
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