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Aurelia, Vampire Beauty
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:34:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Her eyes exceed wickedness beyond the most dark of vampires
They give off a smothering curse, putting victims to mercy
The most genuine of purple her eyes are
Her pupils are of an inhuman shape, like the crescent moon
Those amethyst oculars scan any harmless prey
Red like a cherry, her lips slightly pout
Pearly, shining fangs rest against her velvet lips
Her voice pours from her mouth like sheets of gold
Aurelia’s fangs dig into thick skin,
Slurping & drinking the scarlet elixir of survival
Your is like the color of chestnut,
So devilishly smooth & delicate
As it reaches your slender hips
When you walk alone under the diamond sky,
It sways in the lustful wind
Thus lavishly & maniacal you are,
Your vampiric aura strangles me
The touch of your skin violently intoxicates me
As your luscious lips descend upon mine,
They fatally linger forever on my craving lips
Copyright ©
Crimson_Rose
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2004-10-08 16:34:34]
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Re: Aurelia, Vampire Beauty
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by ElatedNBliss on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 05:00:54 PM AEST
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| i really like this...nice work |
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Re: Aurelia, Vampire Beauty
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:16:08 PM AEST
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really enjoyed reading this poem
Stacie |
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Re: Aurelia, Vampire Beauty
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:20:06 AM AEST
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Nice job....i like it alot
Lots of Love
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Re: Aurelia, Vampire Beauty
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by Nazmythian on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:11:01 PM AEST
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I really liked that, too. Well written, and descriptive.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Aurelia, Vampire Beauty
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by brokenbylove130 on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 06:02:44 PM AEST
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this was awsome. i love vampires and this was an awsome peice.
~much love~
~mandi~ |
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