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The Cold
Contributed by
nana
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:01:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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A wisp of wind blew through the trees and
upward toward the sky.
December chills bit frosty paths
across my nose and eyes.
My breath came fast within my chest.
My cheeks were red as flame.
My feet and hands were bundled up
against this awful bane.
What will I do in later days
if this is what's in store?
I think that I will reflect upon
the heat forevermore!
Copyright ©
nana
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2004-10-08 16:01:56]
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Re: The Cold
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 05:10:09 PM AEST
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Re: The Cold
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by n2dep2care on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:40:18 PM AEST
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Simple, cute and nicely written.
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Re: The Cold
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by Remy on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 01:31:35 PM AEST
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heh, i hate the damn snow bunnies... i'm with you, heat and warmth!
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